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Part I
First Impression 7/10
As the page was loading, the first thing I saw was the corner reddish blend of hitomi images. I love the bottom and the
frame effect, but the corner seems a little messy and the color clashes a little from the blue. The text, although essential information,
is all in one block. I understand the space is limited, but try to space it out a little. The 3 webrings listed at the bottom are nicely
spaced ^___^
Layout 25/30
I love that image of hitomi hanging like that! The brushes you used blend perfectly into your layout.
The text, background, color, and effects around the frame are all excellent, but again I would have to say the reddish blend around
the frame is a little messy. Another aspect of the layout is that you disabled the vertical scroll bar. This is a disadvantage for
people with smaller resolutions to access your site. It's weird to me why you would disable the vertical one and not the horizontal
one O__O. I like how you have separate layouts that match for your guestbook and exit pages and how they are named after Ayumi songs!
Content 27/30
Your "Mistress" and "Domain" sections are short, but informative. You may want to organize some of your personal info into
a list. It's easier to read than listing it all within the paragraph. I love how you have little screencaps for your sites. The paragraphs
beside the screencaps are nicely spaced beside them. On the "active" page, your "SOYASound" site has its image on the left. I know you are
going for diversity by switching it back and forth, but it looks really weird because it's the only thing on the page on the left. Unlike
the "future" page that obviously zigzags between the sites, "SOYASound" just hangs in the middle of the page.
Originality 20/20
This layout is very original! I love how hitomi hangs over the frame and how you kind of have a your content
frame in the top half of your graphic frame. The blend shadowing the back and the brushes blending it into the square blue background are
also very creative! This is not a typical iframe layout!
As for content, you seem to like writing in paragraphs for everything. This is quite different from many other sites
that focus solely on lists and short sentences. The headings on the pages are very cute too.
Credits 0/5
I can't seem to find anything about credit. Please put up a page (maybe in the "etc." section) to provide credit
to your sources, unless you really did scan all the pictures, make all the brushes, and own signmyguestbook.com XDDD.
Link Back 5/5
Yup yup! And you made your own button too!
Subtotal 84/100
Part II
Coding Errors 0/max 20
None that I spotted.
Spelling/Grammar 0/max 10
No errors.
Slang 0/max 5
Nope.
Ayame's Pet Peeves 0/max 10
Nope.
Subtotal 0/max 45
Final Score
84 - 0 = 84
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